No Hero, by A Person
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And I only tried to save the world
And I only failed
So why is it so hard?
Heroes live, Heroes die
So can this hero just lay down tonight?
Cuz I'm no hero anymore
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| Posted: 2008-11-13 08:20:28 UTC |
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| 2005-04-05 04:12:52 | Mysti |
| ....sounds like Clark Kent on Smallville.......sorry, just thinking out loud and typing at the same time. happens a lot. I like it. it's very nice
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| 2005-05-12 04:53:34 | FirePoet |
| Very cool read short and to the point.Enjoyed |
| 2005-06-12 16:10:58 | Loreleen |
| I really liked it...short poems always just tell what a person is thinking |
| 2005-06-30 04:18:04 | bLoOdY_tEaRs |
| i seem to say this alot but ...Deep...just Deep... |
| 2005-07-10 06:01:26 | bLoOdY_tEaRs |
| heros are heros for ever...sometimes people forget them..its sad when that happens
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| 2005-08-19 05:29:21 | just james |
| you got that right your not a hero
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| 2005-08-31 18:05:08 | Jesse |
| Very interesting. Quite true also. |
| 2005-11-01 23:25:37 | LaShawnna |
| Its sweet but sad, but I like it all the same. Keep it up. |
| 2006-01-03 08:35:32 | ana |
| why are you stop write a poem
go and write over and over again
i'd like it very much, i can felt the way u are while u write it. |
| 2007-04-12 05:22:33 | chantal |
| uncertainty and confusion, thats the sense i get |
| 2007-06-04 02:54:01 | .:side:walk:. |
| This is CRAZYGOOD! I love it, it is truely awsome! |
| 2008-02-04 18:38:37 | Mollzyyx |
| Very nice. Makes me wanna fly like nananananana BATMANN! woop x |
| 2008-02-09 08:20:28 | Invisible Poet |
| you watched the last superman didn't you? |
| 2008-03-09 04:12:32 | Craney |
| It doesn't sound like poem
But it has some sense
What do you mean, once hero rests he is forgotten by other people? It could be a true. But great legends are stored about great heroes. |
| 2008-03-15 03:20:24 | Firec |
| very to the point, but it gets that point across. |
| 2008-03-24 02:00:07 | Craney |
| Hard to become hero. Much harder to remain hero. By the way Sane Maniac, you are under arrest
(Officer Grabovskiy) |
| 2008-10-23 14:12:52 | poof |
| wow amazingly well done
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| 2008-11-07 17:43:02 | Gold |
| Simple and sound !
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| 2008-11-16 06:28:38 | Silent_Seranade |
| how old were you when you wrote the poem>?
P.S
Check out my poems.
I'm 13 and i love writing poetryy. |
| 2009-03-21 18:07:50 | Babe |
| It was okay. |
| 2009-04-25 01:34:06 | marsha |
| ...always just tell what a person is thinking... or not! I liked your poem! |
| 2009-05-16 16:27:23 | Your Everlasting |
| This is a good poem don'tb ever discourge yourself from telling people how you feel,okay?P.S.I'm 13 and if you want to you can come and check out my poetry!:) |
| 2009-05-16 18:28:01 | sadie |
| thats short and snappy. It's great! |
| 2009-09-06 03:57:34 | (darkkisses) |
| nice poem :) you should check out my poems I think you would like them. |
| 2009-10-11 17:19:06 | justme |
| Like The Honesty |
| 2010-01-18 21:15:17 | **betrayed** |
| very nice :) i like it... hehe HERO!!!! |
| 2010-01-31 18:42:17 | *+*+barbed+*+*wire*+*+* |
| this reminds me of cops. . . `cause ppl used 2 look up 2 `em. but naw ppls R terrifide of `em.
sorry. . . ppl always tell me how random i am
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| 2010-02-06 19:48:56 | kyky |
| deep |
| 2010-03-21 22:22:11 | baya |
| Why be the hero when you can be the villian? |
| 2010-03-21 22:22:29 | baya |
| Why be the hero when you can be the villian? |
| 2010-05-05 01:32:07 | |
| I think it is too short, and it could be longer but other than that you did a good job. |