Let the Blood Flow, by Nikki the Notorious
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Grasp the knife with fingers clenched tight,
Pace over to the victim,
He is nothing more than fucking scum,
He has taken away what is vital,
Now he will pay for his actions,
Unjust are the measures he has taken,
This will not be tolerated,
With the knife unsheathed it pierces the flesh,
Morbid screams are heard,
Tear through the flesh with jagged fingernails,
Feel the blood gush into my hands,
Make sure he dies a slow and painful death,
Maybe he should have thought twice before he fucked with
me.
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Posted: 2005-01-06 04:18:17 UTC |
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2005-03-21 05:29:24 | Melissa |
wow you just wanna fucking kill that person in you poem now dont you... well thats cool |
2005-06-29 20:25:11 | XRebzX |
wow very deep |
2005-07-11 03:05:02 | diamond |
its scary but very cool |
2005-10-16 17:27:52 | |
nah, i think you have a sorta, mmental problem |
2005-11-10 20:43:42 | wendy |
i am so loving your suff, its like im living it went i read it you know you should keep the good work up
wendyx |
2005-12-07 18:17:00 | Crimson_Tide915 |
Its alright but i really cant relate to this one |
2006-01-07 03:37:56 | a rose by any otha name |
a little violent, but i wish you had revealed his crime, it would have allowed the reader to express more sympathy or even empathy for your emotions |
2006-01-08 16:47:18 | Sylvian |
Kill... KIll... Kill... |
2006-02-06 08:51:00 | Natalie |
So many emotions. I love it. Stab Kill Stab!! |
2006-05-25 06:47:01 | User |
Tell me he ain't dead yet.. |
2006-11-09 15:19:54 | *Psychopathic Child* |
What did this person do to you, well whatever it is he must of deserved it. nicely wrote |
2007-01-24 10:39:41 | liberty moon |
i hope u only killed him in ur poem. its always good to vent in constructive manner |
2007-07-24 02:10:05 | destiny_light |
umm wow thats uggggg....interesting...but good very discriptive |
2008-05-20 14:12:29 | ray! |
Betrayal? what went on? not my business but just vent in poetry. Try not to judge
peace love and hair grease! |
2008-11-03 23:24:18 | Freddie Thackery |
HA HA HA HA :) QUALITY! Must be a nine! This is definitely the best worst poem I've read! (Nikki this is legendary). |
2009-05-16 18:36:45 | sadie |
WRITE MORE HORROR ONES I LOVE THEM!!! |
2009-10-02 23:00:50 | (darkkisses) |
nice poem its good. check out some of my dark poetry if you wont to. |