Let the Blood Flow

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By Nikki the Notorious

Grasp the knife with fingers clenched tight, Pace over to the victim, He is nothing more than fucking scum, He has taken away what is vital, Now he will pay for his actions, Unjust are the measures he has taken, This will not be tolerated, With the knife unsheathed it pierces the flesh, Morbid screams are heard, Tear through the flesh with jagged fingernails, Feel the blood gush into my hands, Make sure he dies a slow and painful death, Maybe he should have thought twice before he fucked with me.

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March 21, 2005 05:29Melissa

wow you just wanna fucking kill that person in you poem now dont you... well thats cool

June 29, 2005 20:25XRebzX

wow very deep

July 11, 2005 03:05diamond

its scary but very cool

October 16, 2005 17:27

nah, i think you have a sorta, mmental problem

November 10, 2005 20:43wendy

i am so loving your suff, its like im living it went i read it you know you should keep the good work up
wendyx

December 7, 2005 18:17Crimson_Tide915

Its alright but i really cant relate to this one

December 29, 2005 21:19Dimplegirl

Wow very Good..

January 7, 2006 03:37a rose by any otha name

a little violent, but i wish you had revealed his crime, it would have allowed the reader to express more sympathy or even empathy for your emotions

January 8, 2006 16:47Sylvian

Kill... KIll... Kill...

January 27, 2006 23:28Sigourney

damn!

February 6, 2006 08:51Natalie

So many emotions. I love it. Stab Kill Stab!!

February 28, 2006 23:31Acerbated

i like it :)

May 25, 2006 06:47User

Tell me he ain't dead yet..

November 9, 2006 15:19*Psychopathic Child*

What did this person do to you, well whatever it is he must of deserved it. nicely wrote

January 24, 2007 10:39liberty moon

i hope u only killed him in ur poem. its always good to vent in constructive manner

July 24, 2007 02:10destiny_light

umm wow thats uggggg....interesting...but good very discriptive

January 2, 2008 08:15BurnsLikeAThousandScars♥

eek bit creepy but wicked poem!

OK, alot like your oter poem. try to change subject to sumthing more cheery. death is really creepy.

May 20, 2008 14:12ray!

Betrayal? what went on? not my business but just vent in poetry. Try not to judge
peace love and hair grease!

November 3, 2008 23:24Freddie Thackery

HA HA HA HA :) QUALITY! Must be a nine! This is definitely the best worst poem I've read! (Nikki this is legendary).

May 16, 2009 18:36sadie

WRITE MORE HORROR ONES I LOVE THEM!!!

October 2, 2009 23:00(darkkisses)

nice poem its good. check out some of my dark poetry if you wont to.

February 20, 2010 15:57Pandabear

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