Let the Blood Flow, by Nikki the Notorious Subscribe to rss feed for Nikki the Notorious

Grasp the knife with fingers clenched tight,

Pace over to the victim,

He is nothing more than fucking scum,

He has taken away what is vital,

Now he will pay for his actions,

Unjust are the measures he has taken,

This will not be tolerated,

With the knife unsheathed it pierces the flesh,

Morbid screams are heard,

Tear through the flesh with jagged fingernails,

Feel the blood gush into my hands,

Make sure he dies a slow and painful death,

Maybe he should have thought twice before he fucked with
me.
Posted: 2005-01-06 04:18:17 UTC

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2005-03-21 05:29:24Melissa
wow you just wanna fucking kill that person in you poem now dont you... well thats cool

2005-06-29 20:25:11XRebzX
wow very deep

2005-07-11 03:05:02diamond
its scary but very cool

2005-10-16 17:27:52
nah, i think you have a sorta, mmental problem

2005-11-10 20:43:42wendy
i am so loving your suff, its like im living it went i read it you know you should keep the good work up wendyx

2005-12-07 18:17:00Crimson_Tide915
Its alright but i really cant relate to this one

2005-12-29 21:19:44Dimplegirl
Wow very Good..

2006-01-07 03:37:56a rose by any otha name
a little violent, but i wish you had revealed his crime, it would have allowed the reader to express more sympathy or even empathy for your emotions

2006-01-08 16:47:18Sylvian
Kill... KIll... Kill...

2006-01-27 23:28:08Sigourney
damn!

2006-02-06 08:51:00Natalie
So many emotions. I love it. Stab Kill Stab!!

2006-02-28 23:31:06Acerbated
i like it :)

2006-05-25 06:47:01User
Tell me he ain't dead yet..

2006-11-09 15:19:54*Psychopathic Child*
What did this person do to you, well whatever it is he must of deserved it. nicely wrote

2007-01-24 10:39:41liberty moon
i hope u only killed him in ur poem. its always good to vent in constructive manner

2007-07-24 02:10:05destiny_light
umm wow thats uggggg....interesting...but good very discriptive

2008-01-02 08:15:58BurnsLikeAThousandScars♥
eek bit creepy but wicked poem!

2008-04-19 00:38:40***^^Nicole^^***@K@:Iifetime7poet4eva!
OK, alot like your oter poem. try to change subject to sumthing more cheery. death is really creepy.

2008-05-20 14:12:29ray!
Betrayal? what went on? not my business but just vent in poetry. Try not to judge peace love and hair grease!

2008-11-03 23:24:18Freddie Thackery
HA HA HA HA :) QUALITY! Must be a nine! This is definitely the best worst poem I've read! (Nikki this is legendary).

2009-05-16 18:36:45sadie
WRITE MORE HORROR ONES I LOVE THEM!!!

2009-10-02 23:00:50(darkkisses)
nice poem its good. check out some of my dark poetry if you wont to.

2010-02-20 15:57:59Pandabear
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