Keep Holding On, by izzy Subscribe to rss feed for izzy

on the summer days you feel so cold
what was a flawless face is now old

you think that you do it for a cause
but your ingnorance is your only flaw

you think what you eat is garbage
but eating your finger does the real damage

your will power, you think you're so strong
sometime it's a good thing in this case it is wrong

who's gonna save your life, your soul
you have a friend, your story will be told

fighting hard, do not relapse   
your will power's better now than in the past

dedicated to one of my friends who had an eating disorder.
she has finally overcome it and is fighting hard not to
relapse.
Posted: 2009-04-01 01:26:42 UTC

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2008-12-10 02:38:13Chalan
I like this poem. its very interesting and different.

2009-03-25 21:28:23!!! A DOUBLE EDGED SWORD !!!
well done

2009-04-26 20:41:22♥`HopeBringsSorrow`♥
this is great!! it really speaks to me....you see...i used to have an eating disorder and its really hard on everyone....its always good to have a friend...very good job

2009-04-26 20:41:23♥`HopeBringsSorrow`♥
this is great!! it really speaks to me....you see...i used to have an eating disorder and its really hard on everyone....its always good to have a friend...very good job

2009-05-06 23:08:56ma_chapa3xD
aww! that's really sweet of you! keep on writing! *Rachel :"D

2009-05-10 23:33:43amylynn242
yes, my poem, The Worst Pie's In London Was from Sweeney Todd...lol

2009-05-16 23:24:30Your Everlasting
This is good I used to have an eating disorder when I was four-six so I can understand how your friend fells well sorta.

2009-06-24 05:18:16Simply-Me-20104
Best of wishes to your friend and Kudos to you for being there for her!! Great poem!

2009-07-26 05:41:56Lily
this is a very well done poem

2010-02-07 00:28:44Disruptive Silence
this is so amazing and inspiring! you told a story in poetic form and that is hard to do!