A VISION, by !!! A DOUBLE EDGED SWORD !!! Subscribe to rss feed for !!! A DOUBLE EDGED SWORD !!!

All-alone in this room filled with sorrow
I envision a grate day as a sweeter marrow
& in doing so I yearn for your touch your loving embrace
To be with you once again & to see that beautiful smile upon
your face
At night I ponder on a breathless bliss
Of being by your side emirs in your loving tenderness
So as we walk hand in hand along the shore of a crystal blue
sea
Sharing a perfect complete love my deepest fantasy
I'd look deep into your eyes & know our feelings are as one
By this we are joined
True Intimacy 

07/15/06
Posted: 2009-04-28 02:16:19 UTC

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2008-08-16 06:58:33Simply-Me-20104
Awww this poem is so sweet! I love your word usage too!

2009-01-03 01:08:44Janjan
Dear Chuckster; Very deep, and emotionally written. Love it. Thanks for reading my poems. Glad you liked them. Love, Janjan xoxo

2009-02-28 05:21:15Natural_beauty_Ashe
this is great and very deep and revealing in a way.

2009-04-08 04:57:03papaya
What a beautiful piece!! I like " true Intimacy" No plastic...

2009-04-08 16:29:06!!! A DOUBLE EDGED SWORD !!!
=)

2009-04-20 21:17:31Teresa
WOW!!! i really like this one Thank you for commenting my poems and no black and white is not about me but about a drawing that i saw n i decided to find the poem behind it -Teresa

2009-04-20 21:35:58!!! A DOUBLE EDGED SWORD !!!
THATS GOOD TO KNOW THANKS!

2009-04-28 14:03:50Ashley Reneƫ *Raining Tears*
yes, this poem is sweet as "Just_A_Gurl... 20104" said.. i like it

2010-04-10 21:56:59rebecca elizabeth pineda
Aw i like this poem