Your Gift (19), by Angel of Music Subscribe to rss feed for Angel of Music

How to thank you for all that you do?
Not even a gift of rare jewels would do.

A gift of silks and furs from lands afar?
Not even spices or gold from a foreign bazaar.

If I could I would give you all of these things,
and not even repay the gift you give without strings.

You give money and time, knowledge and smiles,
And even in bad times you make everything worthwhile.

With a smile in your eyes and a song on your lips,
You make every day almost perfect bliss.

Yet not one of these things is the gift on my mind,
For a gift like your love I will never again find.

So how do I thank you? How would I know?
There is not one thing I could do my gratitude to show.

But one thing for certain I know I shall do,
I shall aspire to one day be a mother just like you.





      
    
  
 
   

 
 
Posted: 2009-01-20 22:26:00 UTC

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2007-03-15 18:24:49Angel of Music
Hey! Me again lol! I wrote this for my mom for her birthday. She went and got it published. I hope you enjoy!

2007-03-17 05:45:33Simply-Me-20104
She must have been very proud, and for a very good reason. I easily connected with this poem, I did the same for my parents! Very good at expressing your emotions!

2007-04-02 14:58:00Mykl
It sounds as if you have a wonderful mother who has a wonderful daughter.

2007-04-07 17:10:57liberty moon
this inspires me to be a mom like that. gr8 tribute.

2007-04-14 04:28:04Just Eat My Heart Out
this was really touching.. can i print this and stick it on my fridge?? lol i love it!! i really enjoy all of your work, you are an awesome poet!! ::~Nicole~::

2007-05-11 17:20:56Angel of Music
Haha of course you may! thanks for the comments everyone!

2007-05-17 18:33:57Chuck Shorter
If I said this poem is beautiful it would be a gross UNDERSTATEMENT!. It's positively heart rending and lovely. Keep up the great work Amanda! Luv Chuck

2007-05-18 15:00:32Chuck Shorter
Dear Amanda, Thank's for the heartfelt compliment, I really appreciate it. Don't ever underestimate your talent, your poems are just fantastic. Your's sure is one lucky family! I'm sure any parent would be proud to have a daughter like you. Luv - Chuck

2007-05-31 00:39:07Felicia
i love this poem very touching i hope you will continue to made poems and don't forget to look at my new one's byes Felicia

2007-06-01 02:07:50Too Blinded by the lips of L*O*V*E* to taste their sweet poison!
i like this poem... i can relate to it very easily and thank you for the comments our works seem kinda similar.. you have a good beat and nice vocab... keep it up

2007-06-05 01:32:28connie
this poem made me want to cry

2007-06-05 18:27:30Forbidden Heart
Writing a poem for someone is always a beautiful thing to do... It's just that, we always see them smiing after reading our poems. Nice poem... Keep writing...

2007-06-11 19:19:43Only one ggirl right for me
First off Thanks for the comment on my stuff it makes one fell good to know that some one likes what they wright. Your mother sounds like a very nice and caring lady a lot of people don't get that much any more. I'll keep look for more from you. D.C.

2007-06-11 23:24:14-fruit-loop-
,.,.,.wow.,.,.,seems ppl like you,,.i liked it too.,., as i read it,,.i thought it was too a lover,..,then realised,..,no man would make such smiles.,., so it had to be,,,. yer muvver,..,have fun.,.,.,

2007-06-12 02:07:57User
This is a wonderful poem indeed..love it!

2007-08-08 09:21:22debbie
How proud must your family be of you, this poem is beautiful, appreciate you taking a look at my work thanx debbie

2007-09-13 06:17:02PinkFairy
ty for your comment!! i do appreciate it. i like this one :)

2009-01-13 17:43:27Tyler Cedric Golden
your writing and descriptiveness is so amazingly beautiful....i love the way it was expressed as well...amazing job.

2009-01-15 17:02:48!!! A DOUBLE EDGED SWORD !!!
vary well expressed