Revelations, by FrostedCold Subscribe to rss feed for <font color=lilac>FrostedCold

When first I saw you
something stirred within me
could this be?
Feelings that were thought lost.

Patiently I watched us grow closer,
and as if by miracle
we lay under the stars together
each knowing
something new had begun.

We are so alike, yet so different.
Two pieces of a puzzle.
Two hearts brought together by grace.

Love is a dull word compared
to the feelings stirring inside.
I cannot imagine 
myself, without you.
Posted: 2006-01-31 01:46:04 UTC

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2006-02-04 10:00:32 Kirsty (living in the light)
I love this poem, It is very good. Well, better then good.

2006-02-04 23:17:32Crimson.Wings
this is a beautiful poem.

2006-02-09 19:45:11Faith
You are a better poet than you would like to believe...

2006-02-09 19:45:17Faith
You are a better poet than you would like to believe...

2006-06-27 04:59:37User
Simple yet beautiful..especially the last stanza that says "Love is a dull word compared to the feelings stirring inside"..I like this one most..

2007-03-19 23:48:19.:side:walk:.
Brilliant poem! I love this!

2007-09-09 23:23:28Angel of Music
Hey this is really good! Great job!

2009-05-05 01:48:55Janae_WITH pasion
this is great....good job

2010-03-11 15:25:15Convalescence
I like this, esspecially the last line, because it completely sums it up. "I cannot imagine myself without you." Really great work.