still as time

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By poison girl •

We talk a talk that knows no boundries We feel a feel that knows no words Like a life stands subtle, silent, slow...still A lifeless understanding to live a life inmortal The beating of our hearts is our only concious disturbance We walk a walk together that knows no perfect ground The significant cure for our enduring desire, to only hear ones breath My childish behavior is only to hide the silent truth My secret for you and desire for you and my dreams of you Lie untuched in my bleeding head, pleaing for our next meeting But that was when our time was still.

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November 27, 2005 05:28thndrhwk

That's pretty good; it has a very vivid feel to it, and is very relatable. Nice work.

November 27, 2005 12:25Don't build lies on ice cubes.

ahh I can relate to that, particularly the first line. Great poem, I love the repetitive style

November 27, 2005 20:51Crimson.Wings

i can relate to this too. good poem.

November 30, 2005 03:31little_irish_rose

i really enjoyed reading this poem..... it wuz very well written.... good job....

December 1, 2005 20:20Amy Mc

I relate