once upon a nitemare

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By *ANGELofDARKNESS* •

Once upon a nitemare He started in my dreams Then moved out into my life I thought it wasn’t that bad But then I started to feel it Deep within me The pain that he so longed for I could feel his thrust inside my chest And feel the anger in my face As time went on it got worse I slowly started losing faith I thought no one would find me Locked in my own prison Deep within my thoughtful cell He takes me life, my will, my way As long I have my… Wait I can’t say that He has stolen everything I'm worth He keeps my soul trapped deep inside That hour glass that slowly counts Down the days of my dreadful life No one seems to notice I'm gone I've bee trapped in this hell for about a year I guess they must have given up For I have heard no tears The cries I make to all of you Must not be strong enuff So once upon a nitemare Please remember this If you hear my cries at nite Now that I'm almost free From this death that surrounds me And I’ll be there soon

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May 8, 2005 01:48angie

thats really awsem

June 18, 2005 22:22Crimson.Wings

so great

June 19, 2005 07:10Lost~N~lonely

thats good. But in the line must not be stong enuff some people might get confuzed but i know you meant enough

June 25, 2005 16:21Cutebunnywithfangz

I lkie the intensidy of the poem. The hate for this nightmare is all over the poem. It really catches my eye. Great work *ANGELofDARKNESS*.

November 4, 2005 18:03XxDeathXWishxX

this is one of your best ones that actually relates to real life shit that happends because believe it or not we all have been there.
love kendra

August 31, 2006 05:50cute bunny

what a unique poem....

June 20, 2007 14:01destiny_light

wow that was such a great poem...i feel your pain

June 26, 2007 22:53CosmaticStorm

Awesome poem

October 19, 2007 18:51Angel of Music

wow!

January 2, 2008 08:18BurnsLikeAThousandScars♥

this poem makes absolutely no sense whatsoever I love it all you can figure out is that some dickhead has trapped you lol

January 18, 2008 00:42Skin~Essays

kewl poem... hi i'm new here..

July 17, 2008 20:15Teresa

i dont agree with tashii i understood it i felt the same way for awhile there anyway great work i lover it
--Teresa

August 30, 2008 02:14moshqueen

I felt this once too. It sucks monkey nuts when you're in it, but the light shines through and things get better.

March 14, 2009 23:38Gutta Chic

I loved it its so amazing i totaly relate to it keep up the gud work

March 11, 2010 15:30Convalescence

Good poem, slightly depresso on espresso, but I'm lovin it. It's great. Keep up the good work.