Lying in State, by Mykl Subscribe to rss feed for Mykl

Drenched in emotions
the words spill across the page
from the gaping wound of my mind.

Angry words of raw red rage,
alliterations wet with weeping,
warring with wisdom.
wondering why we won't win.

A heart that is ailing continues railing,
till drained and paling,
finally failing.

Life poured out onto the page
to lie
in state
of mind.

Mykl Wike
May 7, 2005
Posted: 2005-05-17 13:08:23 UTC

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2005-08-14 17:57:09Sara
Thats very good, deep and meaningful.

2007-04-04 03:05:31Simply-Me-20104
WOW!! I can really relate to this. It is amazing and shows SOOO much emotion. Also, thank you for the comment! Love, Me

2007-04-07 17:17:44liberty moon
wow... i am blown away the flow is wow... i love how expressive it is. please write more

2007-04-07 17:17:48liberty moon
wow... i am blown away the flow is wow... i love how expressive it is. please write more

2007-04-18 00:55:55Angel of Music
Wow u r very expressive! I like this! btw, Thanks for commenting on my poetry!

2007-06-12 08:35:24User
Full of emotion and well written..really awesome..

2007-08-07 01:03:46theworldinhell
full of emotion and feeling shown how its like

2009-01-15 09:51:33Cathi
I love your mixture of styles. It's a very clever poem, matching style elements and words to create all the WOW of our reactions. Well done!

2009-03-02 13:49:32liberty moon
May i say you are beautiful. If you can look yourself in the mirror and say it to yourself then i think thats even better.

2009-05-13 21:26:38...
This is amazing, so honest and passionate! It flows so well and I love the way it sounds - it was almost as though it was meant to be written it all works so well!