damn you, I need you now!, by sweetNsour Subscribe to rss feed for sweetNsour
Posted: 2009-11-19 04:19:03 UTC

why is he away,
I hate this- i need my baby
I need my man,
I need to have him now
God give me a plan


The distance is killing,
the distance brings fear
the distance makes me angry

oh i hate it,
baby i love you so much
i want to laugh with you,
i want to hold your hands
i want to make love to you
to see your face not a pic

phone calls cant do it
emails cant
web cams cant
text message cant

i need you baby
i need you now
aaaaaaaaaaaaaaahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh it makes me mad

to have my fiance so far in another land

i cant wait for Christmas
i cant wait for Easter
I cant wait for you to visit

you say i might not see you Christmas
now what am i to do

i know you love me
i know you wont cheat

but baby ill for ever feel incomplete
until in your presence ill be.


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2009-11-19 04:46:14Simply-Me-20104
It may not be the intended story, but I see this as the g/f of a soldier at war. Really sad, b/c it's really true. So many women have to deal w/ having the loves of their lives away from home... Very expressive! Kudos!

2009-11-21 08:39:00LostSoul
I've been here...I wish you both the best..wonderfully expressed