Leaving (12), by Angel of Music Subscribe to rss feed for Angel of Music

 
Soon I will not be here,
Soon I will have to say goodbye.
Goodbye home. 
Goodbye friends.
Goodbye place I love.
 
Soon I will be leaving.
I will be leaving for somewhere new.
A new adventure awaits me.
But I don't know where.
 
Maybe someday I will return,
or maybe not.
My life to come is a mystery.
All I can do is live it.
 
Soon I will be leaving.
Please don't forget me once I say goodbye.
Remember me home.
Remember me friends.
Remember me place I love.  
Posted: 2009-05-29 00:21:29 UTC

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2007-03-11 19:00:46Faith
It sounds almost like it should be a song...

2007-04-02 14:56:25Mykl
Great job of expressing your feelings. I am sure that you will be remembered by your old friends, and will make many new ones. You are very talented and original. Live that.

2007-04-23 02:39:17~**AGE_TEA**~
its great really great. very simple and its really great

2007-05-01 14:25:28Let Go....
It has this sort of mysterious vibe to it which I really like. I think its one of the best poems Ive read. And I find it hard to be pleased. Great Work.

2007-05-17 18:43:22Chuck Shorter
This is just awesome. For one so young, you have amazing foresight and vision.

2007-05-24 17:19:51Teresa
I really liked it its great.

2007-05-26 21:56:22Crimson.Wings
Beautiful poem, and thanks for your comments.

2007-08-04 22:42:04Sarah
I like this poem it is written very well

2007-08-08 09:14:35debbie
Im sure they will all miss you, now you can enrich others lives,, good luck, thankyou for your comments on my work.

2007-09-09 01:00:47-fruit-loop-
.,., it sounds to m e,., like you dont want to go .,,.,. i read your intro,,. about the comments and not knowing who read what and commented on where.., with out having to look thru them all.. a new comment shud should be some how different until you have read it,.., :),.., ok .,., have fun,.,.

2009-04-27 18:35:06Only one ggirl right for me
I love this one. I know you have your meaning behind it and what it means to you. But It hits real close to home for me. Its how I feel to the tea.

2010-10-11 20:48:09beautyisinside
I really like this poem it reminded me of the time i left but in the end it wrked out 4 the best