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By longingchainsme

I hate the pictures that we take Perserving the memories of these mistakes Falling down flat on the floor Seeing these problems we flaunt and more I hate the frames we house them in Showing the laughter, the fun, the sin Proving only that we can fail In these bodies, warn and frail I hate the lies that we both lead The carriage of doubt drawn by the steed Faking the smile we wear with a frown Downing the sorrow, slowly we drown The one thing I've got left to hate Is the lie I've told, an open gate The door that you can see right through Scream at me till black and blue I know I shouldn't tell you this But its something big I knew you'd miss I'm sorry my dear, I've failed again Maybe this is my latest trend

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December 21, 2005 18:21Faith

Oops... sorry i pressed the wrong button, i ment to vote, THEN comment. Anyways, this poem is amazing, in every way. I love it and the flow and the rhythm... truly amazing.

April 28, 2006 17:19lost the lonely dead

i like many elements within this writting its a good piece of work the begining seemed a little shaky to me

September 12, 2006 08:32User

Hey..this is good..amazing flow..