Insomniac

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By Broken-Hearted Angel. •

burning eyes swelling with tears such random thoughts such random fears stretching I yawn rubbing my eyes yes I'm awake but am I alive not really sure I know I exist deep in the night sleep I insist closing my eyes looking for a dream again there's no sleep no sleep to be seen only these lies realities treasure can I survive an burning eyes swelling with tears such random thoughts such random fears stretching I yawn rubbing my eyes yes I'm awake but am I alive not really sure I know I exist deep in the night sleep I insist closing my eyes looking for a dream again there's no sleep no sleep to be seen only these lies realities treasure can I survive an insomniac forever time to sleep awake for days blurring my vision a colorless haze ears ringing loudly just go to sleep try counting backwards try counting sheep too many thoughts jumbled in my head when I finally sleep I guess I'll be dead. forever time to sleep awake for days blurring my vision a colorless haze ears ringing loudly just go to sleep try counting backwards try counting sheep too many thoughts jumbled in my head when I finally sleep I guess I'll be dead.

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November 8, 2005 15:37Faith

Very interesting... i know i feel like that a lot of the time. Good poem!

November 13, 2005 06:48Crzy Angelchic

psh...pretty damn awesome. And the whole repeating the stanza, i loved the effect. And by having it almost as one big mess, no real construction (no punctuation or stanzas) it gives it a feelin of rambling and that's EXACTLY how my mind is when i'm tryin real hard to go to sleep but i cant. just one big ramble. yup, i love this poem.