One Blow, by LaShawnna Subscribe to rss feed for LaShawnna

He knocked her to the ground with just one blow of his
fist.She was feeling dizzy but she knew he wouldn't stop
there.He reached down and pulled her up by her hair. He
raised his fist this time connecting it to her stomach, she
went down and began to vomit she had no will power to live,
because he had taken that away months before with just one
blow.She wished she would've listened to her friends, but
she didn't because she thought she loved him.The cocking of
a gun brought her back to reality, then she saw the gun
pointed at her head, then he pulled the trigger and it
killed her with just one blow
Posted: 2005-10-30 16:35:00 UTC

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2005-11-02 03:30:39FakeLaughter31
wow.....nice job ^_- ~Unknown~

2005-11-05 22:30:40waterlily
sounds like a mercy killing

2005-11-07 05:41:36
load of shit