love, by Finding Myself♥♥

love
   i miss it
      its gentle love and care
love 
   i miss it
      its warmth, the life it shares
love 
   i miss it
      suthing, healing touch
love 
   i miss you
      please return at once

Posted: 2007-05-13 20:34:43 UTC

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2005-10-01 21:02:56	hidden
I think the word your after is once. you put ounce in another poem aswell. Sorry I know I'm not really one to comment on grammer and spling but that was just annoying me. I quite liked that, the divices you use are effective.

2005-10-04 00:42:26

ill haven

well, allow me to correct your poem and the comment. ^_^ love i miss it its gentle love and care love i miss it its warmth, the life it shares love i miss it soothing, healing touch love i miss you please return at once AND THEN THE COMMENT: I think the word you're after is "once". You put "ounce" in another poem as well. Sorry, I know I'm not really one to comment on grammar and spelling, but that was just annoying me. I quite liked that, the devices you use are effective.

2005-10-07 19:47:40	waterlily
i think this sweet love poem is darling!