cold and isolated, by ~*Amo*~ Subscribe to rss feed for ~*Amo*~

The whole world is ganging up on me,
my mates turned around so quikly,
from mates to true enemies,
my teachers try and comfort me,
but i know there just the same and everything
they say just means the opposite,
i got dumped by what i thought was my love,
at the first sighn of trouble,
he ran a million miles away,
the cops just spat at me,
and told me how worthless i was,
the prison warden didn't even look at me,
grabbed me by my collor and laughed,
my mum cries when she looks as me
and i can heard her saying
'what went wrong?whatever did i do'
my dad wants nothing to do with me
he can't even bear to look at me
now im sitting here all alone
feeling isolated and cold
just because off a little fun
and messing about.
only you are the one who stuck by me brother
and that i won't forget
our little fights as kids ment nothing
its what happens in the long run
thanks bro, that ill never forget


Posted: 2005-08-17 13:09:07 UTC

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2005-08-21 16:19:57~*Amo*~
wot dya fink? tell me how 2 improve it plz xXx Amo xXx

2005-08-22 02:27:08just james
be more mature

2005-08-22 13:15:50~*Amo*~
wtf how..im on bowt poem

2005-08-22 22:14:56Steven Thurlow
lucky to have such a good relationship with your brohter!!i like this in the sense of it being from the heart almost a poetic diary! its gud!! chin up babe

2005-08-25 15:37:29a rose by any otha name
in life all you may find is one true companion, keep writing

2005-10-28 21:04:32love nothing >>--
If I wanted your advice Id ask Honey...

2005-12-09 18:59:20Lillian
I love how you were able to make me feel just as low, but then the comforting feeling with the brother came into the work and that went away! Good poem.