Broken Promises, by Cutebunnywithfangz
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Broken Promises make
You feel bad.
Broken Promises make
You hurt someone dear.
Broken Promises make
Someone hurt you even if they don't mean to.
Broken Promises make
People cry or even want to die.
Broken Promises
Hurt the most.
Broken Promises.
Have you broke one?
© Copywrite of Adelle Whitefoot |
| Posted: 2005-10-06 12:49:49 UTC |
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| 2005-10-26 07:40:29 | DarkShadow |
| Wow... your poem is like the story of my life...
I like your style, you can say a lot by using a few phrases, this poem is really good, congratulations. |
| 2006-08-31 05:53:55 | cute bunny |
| it so meaningfull...so realistic....it's a great poem.i love to read your poem. congrats....you're relly2 touch my heart!!!! |
| 2006-11-03 01:44:55 | ~**AGE_TEA**~ |
| Diz one's great girl. i really love it. reminds me of a time in ma lyph. :)keep it |