Inside Out, by . QUEENIE . Subscribe to rss feed for <b>. QUEENIE .</b>

as i stare off into space,
watching as another tear falls off my face
wondering whow i got to this distant place.
nothing fits,
and nothing works
all i know is everything hurts

dying from the inside out
with no one there to hear my shout
and another tear drops

as teh tears fall
and my heart aches
why is there no end?

i need someone to say they love me
and everything will be okay
i need these words, here today

something's wrong
im not who i was
there's a terrible place
where all my fears lurk but i cannot face

where am i now?
here.
here is not where i want to be

please, can't someone help me?
and as my tears drop and break,
i remember, and cannot understand.

xox Kyelle
Posted: 2005-01-19 22:07:42 UTC

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2005-08-02 14:30:57Silent Cries
I can understand

2005-08-21 21:54:45. QUEENIE .
thnx 4 the feedback

2005-11-05 15:32:43In_Pain_&_Your_The_Cure
wow. that is really heart filled. Is it true or not?

2005-11-07 23:03:25. QUEENIE .
yeah, it was at the time. :) mostly all my poems are just what i was feeling.

2005-11-19 17:57:24Debz ~~ lost amoungst the pages of a story yet to be told ~~
this is fantastic i just had to comment i have just started looking through your poetry and this one truly stuck out at me well done you have a gift! xxx

2005-11-24 20:40:35~*Amo*~
amazing, all off them, ur feelings shine through deffinetly ur user info i luved that

2005-11-25 14:30:35. QUEENIE .
wow thanks everytone!!! i appreciae that loads, you made me blush too. tee hee

2006-06-27 02:01:22User
Everyone needs to feel loved but it is sad that we feel out of place so often..

2006-06-28 00:32:41. QUEENIE .
mmh, the world is a cruel place.

2007-06-02 02:28:42.:side:walk:.
I understand, this is exactly how I feel, sometimes it's so hard to accept. This poem is amazing! keep it up!

2008-02-15 07:10:21Invisible Poet
hope to one day be up to this writing prowess, maybe you could comment some of my poems with tips and advice thnx

2009-12-01 15:16:10Convalescence
I know exactly how u feel.. and it sucks.