Wake Me

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By Don't build lies on ice cubes. •

wake me up from this dream say my heart isnt breaking wake me up from this dream tell me my soul isnt aching wake me from the dream where i pine in my sleep wake me from the dream where shut eyes do weep wake me up now before i think it might be real wake me up now then love me still dont let me dream in a world all alone dont let me dream that our love wasnt known dreaming and i cant wake up hold me before its too late dreaming and i cant wake up dont let this be my fate why wont you wake me? by myself i cry why wont you wake me? just tell me why

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April 22, 2005 18:25Cutie In A Death Cab

Oh that is so sad. I love how you ended it with questions. It shows vulnerability and really makes the reader empathize. I know, I just commented on a different one of your poems...but seriously they're all so good!

May 24, 2005 05:18firebird

Your poetry is so lyrical. These could easily become songs. Beautiful.

October 18, 2005 09:04Don't build lies on ice cubes.

so a year has passed... thankfully I am no longer in pieces like I was when I wrote this.

November 1, 2005 13:17Finding Myself♥♥

you're right. these are two completely different poems, i was expecting something at least a little clost to my poem. this is good, i know how you feel, thank you for commenting.

September 30, 2010 12:55Bige.C.J

By asking wake me..U actually woke me from my dream..and inspires me to write.