Wake Me, by Don't build lies on ice cubes.
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wake me up from this dream
say my heart isnt breaking
wake me up from this dream
tell me my soul isnt aching
wake me from the dream
where i pine in my sleep
wake me from the dream
where shut eyes do weep
wake me up now
before i think it might be real
wake me up now
then love me still
dont let me dream
in a world all alone
dont let me dream
that our love wasnt known
dreaming and i cant wake up
hold me before its too late
dreaming and i cant wake up
dont let this be my fate
why wont you wake me?
by myself i cry
why wont you wake me?
just tell me why
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| Posted: 2010-07-04 19:48:22 UTC |
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| 2005-04-22 18:25:17 | Cutie In A Death Cab |
| Oh that is so sad. I love how you ended it with questions. It shows vulnerability and really makes the reader empathize. I know, I just commented on a different one of your poems...but seriously they're all so good! |
| 2005-05-24 05:18:18 | firebird |
| Your poetry is so lyrical. These could easily become songs. Beautiful. |
| 2005-11-01 13:17:29 | Finding Myself♥♥ |
| you're right. these are two completely different poems, i was expecting something at least a little clost to my poem. this is good, i know how you feel, thank you for commenting. |
| 2010-09-30 12:55:30 | Bige.C.J |
| By asking wake me..U actually woke me from my dream..and inspires me to write. |