"Missin You", by Candi
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As i gaze at you, starin at me
I think about us, how we used to be
Together with one another, feelin so free
But things began to change, you tried to cheat on me
I had 2 leave you, i just couldn't stay
Couldn't let you do that, wouldn't let you have your way
You got with that other chicc, she was your nite and day
She let you do whatever, with her you got away
But then you parted ways, and came bacc to me
I greeted you with open arms, wider than the sea
You went bacc to you old ways tho, I couldn't let that be
So we split up once again, you didn't deserve me
So why am i here now, with thoughts of you
Wondering how it would be if we could've worked through
The problems that we had, our differences too
I guess what i'm tying to say is, Baby i miss you...
~Candi~
2004 |
Posted: 2005-01-09 07:22:22 UTC |
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2005-03-01 09:50:05 | Flaviena |
its beautiful.. |
2005-05-06 00:35:01 | Candi |
Thanx for the feedbacc, i appreciate it. |
2005-06-12 16:14:36 | Loreleen |
Awww this one is so sweet...good job! |
2005-06-29 18:53:46 | XRebzX |
that is really sweet
check out mine ppl
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2005-08-16 13:04:23 | kelly |
this is really good. i love poem's that rhyme and have so much meaning!check out mine too! |
2005-08-23 21:04:41 | Stacey |
I love this poem! good job |
2005-11-29 01:44:02 | Sweet_N_Simple |
I FEEL SO SORRY FOR U
I HOPE THAT MADE U FEEL LOTS BETTER |
2005-12-06 15:59:03 | Crimson_Tide915 |
Very nice poem i like the rythem you put into this poem.... You should check out some of mine I will be more than delighted to have your feedback |
2007-03-09 10:23:46 | FarmGirl |
nice, beautiful and sweet |
2007-03-27 15:50:31 | Crystal |
very sweet COMMENT ME!!! |
2008-03-24 01:58:05 | Craney |
Always forgive, always persever. You truly love me him. But I don't care off him. I believe that you are the sweetest candy one can only dream of.
Ahhhhhh |