Cuts, by Your Everlasting
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I loved her
the cuts prove it
I loved her
I can't stnd this shit
Cuts of love
cuts of hate
cuts from above
can it be fate
Some go deep
let blood seep
some go low
let blood flow
fifteen on the arm
six more on the leg
it can't cause her harm
thats why I beg
Your Everlasting at the age of ten
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| Posted: 2009-05-07 23:33:11 UTC |
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| 2009-05-15 16:40:37 | Tyler Cedric Golden |
| this is indeed expressive and heartfelt but personally to me alternative solutions should be found for problems such as this but you did a great job on the poem...Tyler |
| 2009-05-15 22:53:17 | Your Everlasting |
| Thanks that is really nice of you.I will keep that in mind,Tyler.Have you read some of my other poems? |
| 2009-05-16 22:24:03 | Snow |
| aww.....she's lucky you love her so much
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| 2009-05-17 07:30:44 | Natural_beauty_Ashe |
| this is very interesting.and good at the same time.thnks for your comments.:) |
| 2009-05-23 13:47:01 | CUTTS**AND_A_BROKEN_HEART |
| Been there, done that!! This is a very amazing poem!!! I feel what ya wrote!! keep going i love it |