The You I used to know

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By *****ELIZABETH*****

Last night the you I used to know appeared mysteriously in a dream. And gently whispered in my ear just so that things were never as they seem. Intuitively you imparted, “I feel your pain within me; and at night, my vision is blurred by your tears.” You spoke to my soul with unspoken clarity and calmly washed away my fears. A familiar light that shone brightly in your eyes enlightened my heart as if to say, ‘I understand… everything you feel inside; I realize how hard you’ve tried.’ All doubt departed with a touch of your hand. Then I awoke despondent to discover it was only a vision of what I wish to be. The you I know in a waking world cannot see the me I keep undercover.

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March 27, 2009 20:24!!! A DOUBLE EDGED SWORD !!!

THIS IS GOOD

April 27, 2009 02:43marsha

I really liked your poem

May 5, 2009 01:51Janae_WITH pasion

this is great

May 28, 2009 07:04dispersed_sky

Very nice!!!

July 15, 2009 19:00♥ Leah ☺

just amazingg!

November 2, 2009 22:59*Broken Wings*

Great poem, keep writing.

January 11, 2010 14:25Alvas

Interesting and very nice poem :)