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I FEEL YOU THERE SHEDDING YOUR TEARS
      
LIVING YOUR LIE &
OVERWHELMED BY YOUR FEARS.
VICIOUSLY BEATEN YOUR HEART LAYS IN THE DIRT LEFT TO DIE  
EMOTIONALLY DETACHED CAN YOU SEE HOW MUCH I REALLY CARE?
        
YEARNING FOR YOUR AFFECTION I WAIT WITH SUCH DESPERATION
OTHERS THINK I'M CRAZY BUT I KNOW WE MAKE THE PERFECT PAIR
UNTIL THE END UNITED WE SHALL WALK TO OUR FINAL DESTINATION

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02/26/09
Posted: 2009-04-30 03:31:59 UTC

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2008-12-24 06:15:37Simply-Me-20104
Wow! This is really powerful! Shows a heart's true feelings!

2009-01-23 18:58:52miss insashable
i liked it, i feel it would have been better had you have kept going, feels like you have alot to say and its worth saying lol. keep up the good work

2009-02-16 19:33:29Natural_beauty_Ashe
its so amazing and passionate and its like your saying someting and you know that this is not all you want to say.so keep going.

2009-02-16 19:33:46Natural_beauty_Ashe
its so amazing and passionate and its like your saying someting and you know that this is not all you want to say.so keep going.

2009-03-21 13:02:15CUTTS**AND_A_BROKEN_HEART
WOW! THIS IS AMAZING, SO MANY STRONG FEELINGS SHOW IN THIS ONE POEM. GOOD JOB

2009-03-26 02:18:50Chalan
I liked how you had written your poem. It's unique. And I like the passion and emotion in your words. Nicely written. And thank-you for your comments on my poem "Stand"

2009-03-28 06:05:28!!! A DOUBLE EDGED SWORD !!!
THANK YOU ALL FOR READING

2009-05-06 14:41:02Ashley Reneƫ *Raining Tears*
WOW! i think thats all i can say.. its great, beautiful, lovely, graciuos, every nice respectful word.!

2009-06-11 16:13:3911 Tragedy's
That's pretty deep, I know the feeling of waiting though, I hate it sometimes, but it's worth it.

2009-09-02 21:14:50MAC
Everything that should be said instead of wait... P.S. New poems up on my end!!! And you are awesome!!!!!!!