Think Again

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By Nikki the Notorious

You think you are so high and mighty, Using your authority to crush someone that cannot fight back, But what if they can fight back? That thought never even crossed your mind. You have no idea who you are dealing with. They enter quietly, Never knew they were there… As they place the cloth over your face, You did not even budge, First they take what is yours, You are anxious about your belongings, The following night is when there is hell to pay, The nails pierced through his wrists pinning him to the floor, An incision is made to his stomach, He is conscious for all the torture that is done, A knife is put to his throat, “Answer the fucking question.” He answers. The knife gashes his throat open. He is the sliced to pieces. Think twice before you act.

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July 11, 2005 03:07diamond

i take it you have a thing for death. thats creepy. other than that, the poem is cool.

October 16, 2005 17:27

um, i think its um.. different. maybe you should talk to someone

November 10, 2005 20:42wendy

i think its bill, i loved it to bits

December 7, 2005 18:20Crimson_Tide915

I like it but I felt like you kept repeating yourself from the last poem and this one.. Open your imagination

February 28, 2006 23:30Acerbated

i like it :)

June 14, 2006 06:02Unknown

Um... ... ....... it was.. interesting. I guess it really has a message though, but I think there can be better ways to go about that message. Some people enjoyed it, but I agree with "I found a cure to my heartache...x"!

November 9, 2006 15:22*Psychopathic Child*

it really good i like it, this person must of pissed you off

January 24, 2007 10:44liberty moon

very expressive! i think u should look into getting professional help, there seems to be alot of anger and bitterness. may u find love and true love

March 29, 2007 00:53Sithlim

Thats the good thing about art.. it transforms what could have been be ugliest actions into most beutiful creations...
May God give you peace of mind

wow...ok...i really liked te poem.though it was sort of death-threatening.LOL=P

wow...ok...i really liked te poem.though it was sort of death-threatening.LOL=P

February 19, 2010 22:53Pandabear

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