A Beautiful Moment, by Not Over It Subscribe to rss feed for Not Over It

Beautiful. Calm. Perfect. Moment.
It is quiet, amazing, still.
The moment; once here and forever gone.
Orange glows onto the street through the fog.
The trees are still, but move.
They rustle slowly in the rain, but remain soft and
delicate.

Boom. Crash. Crack. Thunder.
The thunder rolls like it did on summer nights long ago.
The lightening brings a moment into a new perspective.
A new light, another way, another moment gone.
It may be remembered, or soon forgotten,
but it is a moment: beautiful and perfect in it's own way.


(written 5/15/07 12:00AM)
Posted: 2008-04-03 19:07:35 UTC

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2007-07-13 03:53:29User
Hey, I love this..

2007-07-23 16:37:00Caitlin_Californication
i love the contrast in the 2 blocks. vundabar!

2007-07-31 17:02:22Angel of Music
ur like me... you write things in the middle of the night. that is when some of my best work has been written. Well, I think that you are very talented. I really like the feelings and emotions that you put into this poem! keep up the great work! ~Angel of music

2007-09-02 09:46:53liberty moon
LOL... this is good work i loved it

2009-01-13 17:41:39Tyler Cedric Golden
very good job on this poem i like the way it was expressed and written...