I Cant, by FarmGirl
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I cant go on pretending I'm happy,
I cant go on hiding my frown,
I cant go on faking my smile,
I cant go on trying to turn my life around,
I cant go on trying to be like you,
I cant go on wishing i was like you,
I cant go praying to be dead,
I cant go on saying it would be better without me,
I cant go on being this way,
I cant go on trying to play,
I cant go on judging you,
I cant go on judging myself,
I cant go on hiding everything,
I cant go on running from you,
Just Face it I cant go on....
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| Posted: 2007-05-13 05:59:53 UTC |
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| 2007-05-27 00:18:35 | ~~~~GLOSTARG~~~~ |
| I wanted to juust read this poem...but it's message is utterly chilling...I hope you know this: There are those in the world that pray constantly for others who feel they have lost a reason to live. there are people who are there to take your hand and love you.I don't know if your Bio was a true "reaching out for help" but if it was I just want you to know I love you, and you can love you too!GOd loves you Too..always!!! Your poem reads too real,but i hope this write is a projection on text for poetry sake! You are a good poet, keep writing! |
| 2007-05-27 07:06:09 | mytruth |
| I would have to ditto what *G*l*o*s*t*a*r*g* wrote below. However, I wanted to add, that I spent many years feeling what you wrote here. Just when you feel you can't go on, your God takes you one more step to carry you through. There is hope. And do KEEP WRITING! :) |
| 2007-06-18 15:58:57 | Felicia |
| really nice your awesome at writing poems so never quit. Felicia |
| 2007-06-29 07:36:40 | liberty moon |
| i hear u i really hear u... i hope writing ur thoughts and emotions help u to deal with them. i agree with what glo said. maybe ur wondering how someone that doesn't know u love u? its easy because Christ loves us and we have experienced it so we are able to give that love to u. |
| 2010-03-10 16:27:27 | Convalescence |
| I hear you too. You've gotta push forward girl. It'll all be okay in the end. If it's not okay, it's not the end. You just gotta keep moving, trying. It's gonna be hard, yeah, but it'll be worth it. You've gotta trust yourself. I'll be okay. I know exactly how you feel, but you gotta keep going on, no matter how down you may get, you just gotta move on. Try praying about it. And, if you have... just keep on. |