suicide

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By Eric •

"SUICIDE" WHY IS IT SO WRONG TO WANT TO JUMP DOES IT JUST HURT YOU TO MUCH OR IS IT A FEAR OF LOSS I COULDN'T TRUELY CARE BUT WHAT IS IT THAT MAKES A MAN A MAN WHAT DOES IT TAKE TO STEP UP TO THE LINE AND THROW YOUR SHIRT ASIDE TO LOOK AT YOUR WAEPON AND SAY IT FREE ME FROM THIS WORLD OF MAKE BELIEVE AND WHAT DOES IT TAKE FOR YOU TO SLAP LIFE IN THE FACE AND SAY IT FOR ME BECAUSE YOU WON'T LET ME SAY IT MYSELF ALWAYS MAKEING IT SEEM BETTTER FLOODING MY HEAD WITH LIES OF GOOD FEELINGS SO YOU CAN TAKE IT AWAY AND NOT FORGIVE ME

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November 5, 2006 05:59blackflamingo

Are you writing a shit load of stuff that makes suicide look cool so that you'll feel better about doing it later on or because you just believe in free will? I like your point but the poem doesn't pull me. The poem seems as if it was written for you, not for your audience. But I'm just a bitch.