Human Bondage, by Loneliness is condescending Subscribe to rss feed for Loneliness is condescending

You've tied me up with words
Expecting nothing of me, demanding everything 
Individuality through deformity 
Lost within the indecision 
Following the straight line of circles 
Walking backwards into nowhere 
The one who see nothing sees all
Dancing to the silent tune of screams 
Crumbling into what I am 
Blossoming under Icy stares of hate 
Posted: 2005-02-24 06:16:54 UTC

Current vote: 4. To vote, you must be logged in.
To leave comments, you must be logged in.

2005-02-26 21:10:04perf3ct
I love it. I love how you have opposites like a strait line of circles and silent tune of screams. Thats amazing, it works well.

2005-08-13 12:41:40ladypink
This is very good. I have read a few of your pieces and you are a good writer. Have you joined a writing site? I have joined Writing.com It's a good site and I get a lot of feedabck for my work. Helpful feedback. It's something I think you should consider because you have talent :-)

2006-01-09 21:57:47.xx:+.Disposable.Darling.+:xx.
i also like how you use mix opposites into sentences. and for some reason the line "individuality through deformity" really made sence to me. i guess because it makes it seem like deformity is a gift in some sence, because you have it coupled with individuality which is i think, something every human longs for, to different, to be unique, to stand out, etc. in a sense it feels like, when you put it that way, ugly and deformed people are still blessed in their individuality. i don't know if that's what you were trying to say, but that's i think why it sounds beautiful to me. because if you can make deformity sounds appealing in any sense, that's talent. lol. --michelle.

2006-03-03 16:01:05lost the lonely dead
its beautiful especially the last line thats cool