Living A Lie, by Sam Subscribe to rss feed for Sam

Last Year:

You were so nice
You joked with me
You talked to me
You seemed happy


This Year:

You're mean
You hate me
You won't talk to me
You don't seem happy anymore


If you only knew how much I looked up to you
If you only knew how much I thought you liked me

But Wait...

What's This?

If you only knew how much I hurt inside
If you only knew how much you've put me through

And to think that I let you!

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You pretend to like me

I actually like you

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So which one of us is living a lie?
Posted: 2006-03-28 01:01:38 UTC

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2006-03-10 23:03:31Crimson.Wings
Good poem. Really creative. I like the title.

2006-03-13 18:50:18Faith
It's in a very unique structure... i enjoyed reading it.

2006-08-22 08:49:35User
Amazing..I have not seen something like this before..interesting..

2007-05-11 22:41:50Veracity
I can totally relate to this poem. In the past, these were the people I thought were my "friends". Now I know who my true friends are: the people who are always nice and stick by me. Wonderful poem.

2007-05-13 17:41:16 *****Junior Walker*****
quality poem,nice structure 2,and thanx for the comment

2007-05-23 17:44:31Angel of Music
Great job! I really enjoyed reading it!

2007-06-28 03:34:06Simply-Me-20104
I always try to look at the poems that have been commented the most on a person's page. It's interesting to see how one poem can be related to by so many people! Very expressive!!

2008-03-31 18:22:29soccer gurl in love
i like this poem it really shows your feeling and i can relate

2010-07-16 18:57:13Violet Crystal
Very relatable. Unique and incredible. Great job.