She Closes Her Eyes to Stop the Tears, by I'm The Girl That Holds Everything Inside Subscribe to rss feed for I'm The Girl That Holds Everything Inside

She breaths in
The pain is sharp
She's been stabbed
A sad song plays from the harp

The makeup runs down
Her expressionless face
All emotion is gone
She stares into space

Theres a red pool around her
Suddenly she gasps
Is this how it ends?
Why couldnt it last

More tears run
Out of her empty eyes
Her chin falls
The little girl dies

Posted: 2006-02-17 05:18:44 UTC

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2006-02-18 17:20:54love nothing >>--
WOW....I love it...so sad, and I feel I can relate. Love the darkness about it. and the sudden ending. will read your other poems too. propz XD

2006-02-20 19:55:53Crimson.Wings
wow. this was very emotional. heartbreaking poem. i'm giving it a 9.

2006-12-17 22:03:40me
wow!!I thought i could write well. You have a wonderful way of expressing your thoughts.The name of my thing is ME.you can look at mine if you want

2006-12-22 18:52:44Just Eat My Heart Out
wow... this is very different... i like it, good job

2007-11-22 01:26:30SMILING DARKNESS
aww that poem is so sad but i absolutly love it! U can really see the emotion