Goodbye.

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By ;twisted shadow. •

<center><font size=2>Watching the rain flowing on the window My reflection seems to be crying... If you don't love me, I won't stop you The time is approaching When I can no longer pretend not to notice My heart is screaming Goodbye, I won't see you again Goodbye, I've made up my mind I can't be a woman who will do whatever you want Set me free Your voice that I hear through the phone You are being too thoughtful That isn't kindness Don't prolong the present with lies I hate myself for still having these feelings for you Goodbye, I won't see you again Goodbye, I have to accept it The picture of us that I loved so much is now face down Set me free Goodbye, I won't see you again Goodbye, I've made up my mind I can't be a woman who will do whatever you want Goodbye, I won't see you again Goodbye, I have to accept it Those memories that bound me Are now quietly Sleeping... Set me free

Current vote: 9.0 / 5

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February 18, 2006 02:12Crimson.Wings

this is a beautiful poem. i gave it a 9.

February 20, 2006 09:32Debz ~~ lost amoungst the pages of a story yet to be told ~~

this is very well written and has such powerful words portraying your sadness of losing someone close i have written a poem not as good as this one but its called standing on the station and it has both sides of the story the other poem is sitting on the train they connect together to show the person leaving and the person saying goodbye x

February 27, 2006 00:45.:side:walk:.

Very thoguhtful, i love this poem!