Me &... I myself, by ChuKico PrIme
The song of wind,
rhythm of streams
that can make your heart swing.
Not one to share, I'm alone.
Sense of freash leaves,
sight of green weeds,
although they're sweet,
the day you left, i'm alone.
Roars of beasts,
coldness with no heat.
However I'm scared,
Who cares? No one's there.
In the jungle of life,
can't feel hell or paradise,
Have i lost my pride?
Will you come back? or
Will i find my way?
Wonderig with fear,
Who will decide my fate?...
I want it to be me,
and it's must be.
|Posted: 2006-02-07 07:02:49 UTC|
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|2006-02-09 17:17:57||~*~Magpie Von~*~
|you're always leaving me comments, so now its my turn! YAY! I really like this one. I've felt much the same way.
|2006-02-12 02:13:47|| ~~~~GLOSTARG~~~~
|Hi I really like this poem! and thank you for visiting my site and for your coments.
|Hey. I really really liked this poem. And i enjoyed reading it. Please write more :)
|2006-02-18 00:06:27||stolen soul
|that was a great poem i really loved it & thank you for writeing to me you one of the best people on this site = )
|very relatable... i like it a lot.. thank you for your comments on mine
|this is beautiful... thanks for your comment