Goodbye :(, by egyptian_girl
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why is it tht be4 each goodbye
i get so depressed and sad
i don't even wish to try
not to feel so bad
why is it tht be4 each goodbye
i really don't mind at all
leaving everyone behind
though i usually feel so low
why do u say goodbye?
why not see ya later?
coz even if u don't know when ...
we'll surely meet again!!!
SO plz next time if we get apart....
even if u're sure tht we might not meet....
don't say goodbye!!!
make my day greater
by just saying i'll try!!! |
| Posted: 2006-01-24 21:09:53 UTC |
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| 2006-01-25 20:12:17 | Spiritual Beauty |
| i wish they would do that.... aber nicht alles geht wie wir es wollen, oder? |
| 2006-01-29 23:18:35 | stolen soul |
| that was perfect ok nothings perfect but its close. =) |
| 2006-02-06 03:07:34 | Crimson.Wings |
| thank you for commenting on my poem. :) i like this poem alot, i think you did a good job writing it. |
| 2006-02-10 16:50:15 | ~~~~GLOSTARG~~~~ |
| I do not like goodbyes either! :) good job on this poem! glostarg |
| 2006-02-18 01:38:04 | Love Dragon |
| I really like this poem. I know how you feel i had to move lately. |
| 2006-09-17 16:37:36 | Dimplegirl |
| Great poem~ by the way thanks for commenting mines.
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| 2008-02-22 01:58:49 | true_poet |
| Nice poem, and are you really egyptian?? :) |