Alone

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By longingchainsme •

She's safe now Away from the things in this world That brought her to her knees They saw her faults And only her faults Never saw past the lonliness The sleepless nights When she was too scared to leave When she was too scared to stay They saw fear, anger, pain, but Only when it was too late We saw her For who she really was A quiet girl who loved her life But not the people in it We kept her sane They drove her mad She's there because of them There....there is far away Far from the ones who love her The ones who need her They locked her up She's not a mental case She's a problem they can't fix And hide away

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April 28, 2006 17:28lost the lonely dead

a quiet girl who loved her life but not the people in it was a good line, also shes there because of them...but if i were you i would say 'shes there because of them but/ far from the ones who love/ they're the ones that need her...suggestion for what its worth

September 12, 2006 08:42User

Hmmmm...this left me thinking even after the poem ends..this is well described to me but I think there should be more emotions..