life in a candle, by ~*Amo*~ Subscribe to rss feed for ~*Amo*~ 

life is like a candle,
as the candle shortens,
so does life,
as the candle melts,
our tears wash us away,
as the candle turns into a solid blob of nothingness,
so do we,
as the candle dies away...
Posted: 2005-11-24 20:35:55 UTC
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2005-11-24 20:36:31~*Amo*~
ooo its not good, not good at all, its shit

2005-11-30 16:24:17Faith
It's not that bad... it just needs a little work. *smiles*

2006-09-05 08:09:18hyper
i like it, it's truely expressive ,there is a similarity btw the way we and the candle pass by this life