We’ve Looked Deeper, by F@LLeN_@NgEL Subscribe to rss feed for F@LLeN_@NgEL

You tell us to open our eyes
“Look deeper within”
How bout u look,
Underneath your own skin.

Cos we’ve NOT got the problem,
We’re not making all the fuss,
U can say, do, feel, what u want,
But don’t blame it all on us.

We’ve done nothing,
Except be each other’s friend,
If u can’t handle that,
Then you've hit the dead end.

There’s no turning back,
Cos you’ve said what you’ve said,
You’ve sent your “coded” messages,
Ur messed up in the head.

So do yourself a favour,
Grow up and realise,
There’s nothing wrong with us,
It’s all in your own eyes.
Posted: 2005-11-21 21:20:22 UTC

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2005-11-25 19:08:03pain never stops
yeh u've looked deeper but not deep enough! yur at the shallow depth get to the top! i dnt care think of yurself be happy thats all i care! when did i say there was sumfin wrong wit u's? never!! be each others friends? u havent bn around yeh u will say ive pushed u but u havent pushed bk!! my messages arent coded if u knew me well enough u would have known wot they had meant!! but yur wrapped in yurselfs not to uncode and no who i am! i cried for help in those messages but u didnt know me well enough to get that!! so just do me and be happy i want to see a real smile not a fake!! im not bein a bitch i mean in!! get yur lists down i hope that u do!! u's have each other to help i'll do mines on my own!!!