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By Finding Myself♥♥ •

"can i do it"? i don't think so "can i stay there"? i don't know "do you trust"? of course "here it goes" (no) the "" are him i am the second lines the () are my thoughts hope you enjoy

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September 23, 2005 22:28thndrhwk

Oddly haunting; it's kind of wierd but interesting.

September 24, 2005 07:16ill haven

I like it! It makes the reader think, which is what i love in poems. I hate it both in poems and in horror movies when they dumb the audience down by telling them EVERYTHING!!! cough cough Cry Wolf cough cough.
good write
-af-