i'd do it again #2, by Finding Myself♥♥
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all i said i wouldn't
("go lay down")
i did
all i said i'd do
("c'mon just do it")
never happened
all of my ambitions
("God, just do it")
my hopes
("c'mon faster")
and my dreams
("will you let me"?)
are now impossible
and the worst part about it
("i'm only doin this because i love you")
is that i'd do it again |
| Posted: 2007-05-13 20:34:02 UTC |
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| 2005-09-22 02:13:49 | ill haven |
| interesting!
it leaves the mind with questions, which i guess is how girls are supposed to work ^_^.
thanks for this one. i like it.
did you mean to exclude the word "do" from the end of L1?
i also assumed that "doin" was purposeful.
awesome.
thanks for commenting.
chuff |
| 2005-10-04 00:44:01 | ill haven |
| i guess you did, huh?
oh well.
i got you covered so far, 'terr. have a sweet life. |
| 2005-11-03 10:46:47 | hidden |
| Interesting, I'm not sure if its meant to be read with two people telling the poem but thats how i read it. I liked it. OOh and about your user info, It was you that sent those bloody chain letters! (joke) |
| 2006-04-21 00:50:55 | Finding Myself♥♥ |
| that's exactly how i imagined it being read. i'm glad you got it :) |