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incoherant thoughts
rambled from my mind
babblings of the girl
who's true love she never will find.
she longs to feel the wind 
brush across her procelain skin
she longs to hear the words they whisper
behind the walls so thin
she longs for him to hear her
him to open up his ears
to hear the words she called out to him
through the silence of her fears
she longs to have him look at her
to see her inner beauty
to hold her in his arms
and never stray away
she longs to feel the love of someone
anyone she can find
she screams out as loud as she can for attention
but then throws it all away.
Posted: 2005-09-20 23:46:30 UTC

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2005-09-21 02:09:02waterlily
strange poem but strong writing skills are shown...how does she throw it all away:the ending is a mystery...

2005-09-21 09:37:07Debz ~~ lost amoungst the pages of a story yet to be told ~~
I felt like i was reading a story of myself here its a really strong poem and taken from a different angle to how many people write poetry. Well Done you

2005-09-22 20:22:50a rose by any otha name
it leaves much to wonder which is great for keeping the brain working :)

2005-09-25 02:04:21~*Lost*~
You have an amazing way with words and the rhyming scheme is exalent..Good work...You should be proud...

2005-09-25 16:46:25My_pain_your_thrill
I can really relate to this, it is odd the way it is written, but your talent shows through, and if you relate to it, it makes sense. Very well done.