Lost

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By Bizzy •

incoherant thoughts rambled from my mind babblings of the girl who's true love she never will find. she longs to feel the wind brush across her procelain skin she longs to hear the words they whisper behind the walls so thin she longs for him to hear her him to open up his ears to hear the words she called out to him through the silence of her fears she longs to have him look at her to see her inner beauty to hold her in his arms and never stray away she longs to feel the love of someone anyone she can find she screams out as loud as she can for attention but then throws it all away.

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September 21, 2005 02:09waterlily

strange poem but strong writing skills are shown...how does she throw it all away:the ending is a mystery...

September 21, 2005 09:37Debz ~~ lost amoungst the pages of a story yet to be told ~~

I felt like i was reading a story of myself here its a really strong poem and taken from a different angle to how many people write poetry. Well Done you

September 22, 2005 20:22a rose by any otha name

it leaves much to wonder which is great for keeping the brain working :)

September 25, 2005 02:04~*Lost*~

You have an amazing way with words and the rhyming scheme is exalent..Good work...You should be proud...

September 25, 2005 16:46My_pain_your_thrill

I can really relate to this, it is odd the way it is written, but your talent shows through, and if you relate to it, it makes sense. Very well done.