Rewritten, by Lovesick and Sick of It Subscribe to rss feed for Lovesick and Sick of It

Oxygen
Food and water
They’re not important
All I need is
All I want is

Love
Your love
Our love
That shows

When I’ve had the kind of day
Where there’s been a rain cloud over my head all the time
And it’s just been the crappiest day ever

And then my phone buzzes
And it’s you
You texted me-
 
“Hi Sweetie
Just calling to say
I love you!
Have a great day.”

And suddenly all is right in the world
And I smile
And there are tears in my eyes
Because of how much you care

All I want is
All I need is
You

The only problem is
I don’t know who you are



Posted: 2005-12-09 02:45:01 UTC

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2005-12-07 02:56:45Loneliness is condescending
great job this poem is swell. what eles could i say keep writing i guess