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There is a certain garden 
Where the stitches of life are sewn. 
And in the middle of this place 
Sits a fountain made of stone. 
The waters splashing in this place 
Are waiting just for you. 
The wishes made around its base 
Are always coming true. 
The fairies of the mountain side 
Come fluttering down the mount: 
They spread their wings to see the fountain, 
Too numerous to count. 
They make their way to the open field 
To greet the flowers there. 
They nestle on the stems and leaves, 
Thus sweetening the air. 
So come, make your way, one by one 
And see the special road 
Leading to the magic fountain, 
Fountain made of stone. 
Posted: 2005-10-05 00:04:10 UTC

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2005-09-18 15:46:37No Child Is Innocent Once Born
This poem is really good, I like the language you usse like (They make their way to the open field To greet the flowers there. They nestle on the stems and leaves, Thus sweetening the air.) It makes the place sound really pretty!

2005-10-07 22:11:36Austin Hoehn
I really like this one. Very nice picture it creates. The thought of a garden where life is planted and persona of water in a fountain waiting for someone is wonderful, pleasent thought. P.S Thanks for the comments on some of mine they are helpful. Smiling Always, Jena

2005-10-14 02:39:13 ~~~~GLOSTARG~~~~
I love this poem.You are an artist in more ways than one!

2010-07-03 18:02:23baya
This poem is so brillantly crafted. . . beautiful imagery I could see it all in my head the whole time.

2015-03-11 01:29:09Malcolm Moss
A beautiful rhythm. Soothing sentiments. Quite different from mine. Lovely.