my shadow

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By hidden •

I'am the one the deals with the pain the other boy, he's called Dane He's the one everyone knows and loves but to find me would be like a bullet through a flock of doves. he's the one that comes out at day he's the one that likes to laugh and play. but i I am the one that emerges at night i am the one that is filled with this spite I'am the hourbor of the illwishings and torment I'am the one that haunts his dreams, I shall be the retribution I have been waiting, lurking, growing, envelopeing myself in the torture. soon I shall have my revenge the whole world shall feel this that I have for too long. your time is spent, we shall rise,we are strong

Current vote: 3.8 / 5

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August 16, 2005 20:56~*Angel*in*U*~

I voted 7 so I don't know why it says 1.75...anyway that was good! Erm I'd look out if I were you. *laughs*
Tc x

October 2, 2005 00:23Finding Myself♥♥

L1-that*, what are you talking about. are you in a gang? hope not. good poem.

October 5, 2005 01:04ill haven

I'm* or I am* the one that* deals
I am* the harbor* or harbour*
ill-wishings* and torment
I am* or I'm* the one that haunts
enveloping*

hmm.. interesting

October 7, 2005 20:53hidden

no gang, thats just me and an alter ego. he's just the one that gets all the anger.