mascara tears, by My.Lovenote.Has.Gone.Flat.XO Subscribe to rss feed for My.Lovenote.Has.Gone.Flat.XO

i ran down the road with black mascara tears running down my
face 
i ran and ran to the only place where i knew i could be
given peace
you followed me and screamed my name but i didnt care it was
just a game to you
our love never meant anything i realised as i  saw the place
where i would make the final decision
you  arived just in time to see me end the pain 
i shouted loud so you could hear
'remember my love . i did this for you .Remember it every
day when you look into her eyes that you betrayed me and
forced me to this'
with my last word i leaped from the stone bridge with the
rope around my neck 
the last thing i heard was his sweet voice shout over and
over 
'im sorry i love you'  

 
Posted: 2010-07-13 19:30:28 UTC

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2010-07-15 11:05:53CUTTS**AND_A_BROKEN_HEART
Oh my...this is a strong poem. It touched me. Very well written. Good job

2010-07-18 18:43:30Silent-Black-Sheep
Very good poem. It's haunting and expresses the pain so well. Awesome job.

2010-07-19 09:45:14My.Lovenote.Has.Gone.Flat.XO
thank you

2010-09-22 15:17:30KayDe$
THIS IS A GREAT EXPRESSION OF OF PAIN AND FEELING AND I CAN RELATE.