SUICIDES last thoughts

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By (darkkisses) •

I'm six feet under, but I can still here the thunder. I'm dead and gone, but I can here the deer playing outside. I slit my wrist, but I can still make a fist. where am I and what am I? The bugs ate out my eyes, but I can still cri. Should I cri for help? will any one here me? My body is going fast, but has any time past? my bones are weak, do I still have any meat? do I still have a heart beat? is this what happens when you kill yourself? Is this suicide?

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October 3, 2009 02:37sammygirl

good poem I wonder what ppl think when they are past away alot.

October 11, 2009 01:13Butterfly

wow dis is a really good poem

October 30, 2009 23:38Moon

Tis thee's epic well done.