The Ocean Breeze, by *Broken Wings* Subscribe to rss feed for *Broken Wings*

I felt the cool breeze of the oceans floor.

All my troubles for that moment
were dismissed.

The way that I use to feel
shipped out to sea.

And now concealed,
As I walk upon the shore,

I realize a hidden door,
running as fast as I could,

I tried to reach that light but
when I thought I was there.

The light had turned into night.

As I felt the wind blow against my skin,

I felt that I wasn’t alone.
I was there with a friend.
Posted: 2009-09-07 03:04:36 UTC

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2009-10-18 14:38:15izzy
this is amazing, you are really gifted.

2009-10-31 19:05:35Moon
Very well done. I wish to exeed in writing my poems

2013-11-06 05:34:42Natural_beauty_Ashe
one word....beautiful you are truly gifted, i love this

2013-11-28 17:14:41shawie
"The light had turned into night" I love that visionary you painted here. Thanks for sharing :)