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the old and new
the white and blue
the fast the slow
the weak the strong
the counted and uncounted
is there a way around?
this world is so unpredictable
putting people in categories
famous are treated like kings and queens
while the poor watch their lives go on
is their a way aroung labeled society
that puts good peopkle in bad places
we see the young in enertainment 
and the old pasing by
your life is not rong because your not counted
even if your small victories are not mounted
your still counted if your not a rich millionaire
your still counted if you dont have long hair and 
the best featured
in your heart your counted
make the best of you abilities
if counted or not
dont waste your life trying to get that top spot.
Posted: 2009-05-07 03:12:13 UTC

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2009-05-07 19:15:34!!! A DOUBLE EDGED SWORD !!!
VERY HOPEFUL KEEP IT UP!

2009-05-10 13:48:09izzy
this is really amazing! i could not agree more with everything you wrote in this poem. great job!

2009-05-15 16:33:43Tyler Cedric Golden
yes inspirational indeed and very true down to every last word....spectacular!...Tyler