this is about everyone~ please read!, by ma_chapa3xD Subscribe to rss feed for ma_chapa3xD

under dispise
under anger 
under jelousy
under hate
under everything thats worse than man's fate

is a candle that has
love
happiness
faith 
hope!
that has a voice that tells you to preservere
and go on
wispering
'you can do it! i know you can!!'

but then there is the finger 
that dares go near
and tampers with it

you loose hope 
you loose love
you loose
you

everything that you built up was going great 
then someone came to play with it
to test you
to ruin you

then sometimes he won
your all burned out
'give up' he says 
'you might as well have no use here after all'
'you're nothing to anyone. remind me why are you still
here?'
but then the finger gets burnt himself 
by whom?
by what?, you might ask

by the one true one
the lighter 
He brings you to life so that you can be with him and always
be together
forever

may you always be in someones heart
for you will never blow out with Him
dont give up
he says as he wipes away your tears
dont give up 
'but ive been so bad' 
i know but its all right i promise you
it's gonna be all right
always
Posted: 2009-04-22 22:25:59 UTC

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2009-04-11 02:28:08!!! A DOUBLE EDGED SWORD !!!
nicely done. this has some mistakes buu i sure feel you

2009-04-11 18:28:10ma_chapa3xD
hey !!! A DOUBLE EDGED SWORD !!! i hope i got every mistake and thanks for notifing me! :"D

2009-04-15 16:10:56!!! A DOUBLE EDGED SWORD !!!
I LIKE YOUR STYLE! KEEP IT UP!!!

2009-04-20 22:18:34Azure Faye
Ave Maria Nina! Genius! I loved it! it really does apply to everyone. Just one thing; in the 6th stanza, you misplelled 'burnt'. Yeah... Tu amiga, Azure

2009-04-22 22:25:37ma_chapa3xD
:"D i cont believe i did that! hahaha! thnks azure! your awesome! ~rachella

2009-05-27 14:40:19Ashley Reneƫ *Raining Tears*
this is really good!

2009-12-04 01:18:47Emma_Bee
Muzzy, ur a poetic Genious!! :D come cheeck out my poems!