suicide

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By kyle

i sit here staring at this gun, thinking i should pull the trigger just for fun did i think it would turn out this way, guesse for everything ive done its time to pay all i can say is that im so sorry, and i hope you never forget me never thought it would turn to suicide, i thought i could just let it slide but every man can only take so much, before he says this is too much that he leaves behind his family and freinds, because he knows life has its ends but before all this he sits and wonders why, as he tries not to cry but fuck it he blows off the back of his head, and paints the walls red now as ppl try to remeber him, all they say is he lived a life of sin but they could never figure out why, why the young man decided he had to die guesse we'll never know it, he never could show it he thought about it daily, how he never got to meet his unborn hailey but its time to go, and end this show R.I.P K.M.B

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February 22, 2009 09:22undiscovered

brilliant poetry! :)

March 7, 2009 22:32CUTTS**AND_A_BROKEN_HEART

OMG!!!!! THIS IS SO AWSOME, A SAD WAY TO END, BUT SO BRILLIANT!!
I LOVE THEY WAY THIS POEM IS BUILT UP!
R.I.P. K.M.B

March 9, 2009 21:38SAMIRA JONES

THATS SAD

March 18, 2009 03:43papaya

This is so sad, yet you express your feeling very well. I am going to read this to my brother.

March 24, 2009 21:10Natural_beauty_Ashe

this is soo sad i feel the pain in there.your right everyone can only take so much before they eventually explode.

May 5, 2009 01:52Janae_WITH pasion

wow this is sad
hope your not thinking about that

October 11, 2009 16:38Reebs

I will pray this young man knows his life is special, there is a reason you are here, believe.Love ya

February 6, 2010 20:19kyky

Wow this is the sadest thing i ve read in a while