THE ATONEMENT FEE, by !!! A DOUBLE EDGED SWORD !!!
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IN THE LONELIEST HOUR ONE CAN SEE HIM SELF COMPLETELY.
ONCE AMERCED IN SELF-DENIAL MY HEART & MIND SANK MOST
DISCRETELY
BUT NOW FROM ALL OUR TIME APART
I FIND MY SELF AGAIN SEEKING FOR YOUR SALVATION
FOR THE LIGHT OF YOUR TRUTH IS LIKE THE SUN TO THE DARK
& IM BUT A FLOWER WILTING FROM THIS GRAVE DEVASTATION
THINKING OF ALL THAT I’VE DESIRE
IN THE MIDST OF SUCH PAIN
ONLY BURNED ALL MY EXISTENCE LIKE WILD FIRE
& UNCOVERED THE LIFE THAT I LIVED WAS TRUELY IN VAIN
AS WITHIN THE MIRRORS OF MEMORY CONSTANTLY TAUNTING
THESE PICTURES OF THY PAST UNFORGIVEN
PICK AT THY MIND WITH A PREVALENT HAUNTING
FOR NOW I SEE FROM THIS DISPAIR & HELPLESS PLEA
I HAVE THE RIGHT TO BE FORGIVEN
A RIGHT TO BE FREE
SO I MUST LIFT MY SELF FROM ALL THIS GRIEVING
FOR THIS CHRIST PAYED THE ATONEMENT FEE
& FOREVER IN MY HEART HE IS LIVING
12/21/08 |
| Posted: 2009-04-30 03:24:22 UTC |
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| 2008-12-18 15:55:59 | Tyler Cedric Golden |
| wow i little mispelled words but this poem is very well written otherwise and is a very interesting read...if you want a idea or to view something similar read one of my poems Concept of Hell or The Other Side...i recommend for a poem such as this and let me know what you think...fantastic poem.... |
| 2009-01-15 22:20:14 | |
| WOW IS RIGHT! The style which you have written your poem, with an olde english tone, begs the reader to read on. The truth is joyous and bright as the sun.excellent.
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| 2009-03-20 14:19:48 | ray! |
| I LOVE THIS!!!! btw - thx for commenting on my poem:D |